PARE: COLORFUL COPY THAT SELLS

The copy on this sign is entirely long & need be pared down with bullet points & less verbiage.  However, the descriptive language really paints the picture what the buyer may expect.  It uses very compelling selling points (tourists will be gone = privacy for you!) & humor (definitely for the Nemo fans!) to engage the prospect.  Surely the call to action need be more clear, but still appreciate how enticing is this trip (we cater to vegetarians!).
Railey Beach, Thailand
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